Mon 31st May 2021 - Re "Moon and June"
Occasionally i'll submit a song to other people in the business of songwriting to get some feedback and I'm very happy to say i've again been noted as a "Songwriter to Watch" by the NSAI - My other song again from the forthcoming "If You Can't Forgive You Can't Love" Album was "The Last Train To Baltimore"
FORM/STRUCTURE: Nicely done, no changes.
TITLE/HOOK: Different and cool. I wanted to hear the song immediately.
LYRIC: The lyric is a bit "written" at times, where you can really feel the
songwriter writing, but it also has some moments that transcend that in a
special way. I love the "High Noon" reference, though I don't get the Mills
and Boon one. Overall though the song just feels good, and is an enjoyable
listen.
MELODY/METER (IF APPLICABLE): I love this melody. Homerun!
OVERALL THEME/IDEA: I really like this overall and am glad to list you as One
to Watch, in particular for a very well written melody and a clever idea.