Mon 31st May 2021 - Re "Moon and June"

Occasionally i'll submit a song to other people in the business of songwriting to get some feedback and I'm very happy to say i've again been noted as a "Songwriter to Watch" by the NSAI - My other song again from the forthcoming "If You Can't Forgive You Can't Love" Album was "The Last Train To Baltimore"

FORM/STRUCTURE: Nicely done, no changes. 
TITLE/HOOK: Different and cool. I wanted to hear the song immediately. 
LYRIC: The lyric is a bit "written" at times, where you can really feel the 
songwriter writing, but it also has some moments that transcend that in a 
special way. I love the "High Noon" reference, though I don't get the Mills 
and Boon one. Overall though the song just feels good, and is an enjoyable 
listen. 
MELODY/METER (IF APPLICABLE): I love this melody. Homerun! 
OVERALL THEME/IDEA: I really like this overall and am glad to list you as One 
to Watch, in particular for a very well written melody and a clever idea.